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Needs a punchline. That last panel is completely pointless and wastes a good setup imo.
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I think it's fine as it is. It's trading funny for poignanncy
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Except the last panel isn't poignant either. Like I said, it's useless. It would be just as poignant without it, and if they had actually written a punchline, it could have been funny too.
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You have a point, the last panel adds nothing. But for most readers it doesn't make it worse.
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But it doesn't make it better for anyone, and it does make it worse for the rest of us, so...
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How about "Welcome to reality"
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"Don't worry! The money will trickle down!"
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"fat bee"
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I'll be them some day!
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"Don't worry, I think he's gonna pull it!"
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58 comments